Should You care where you Spend your Money?

The Schnucks Grocery stores on North Grand and South Grand are different as day and night, not only in the layout, but in the creativeness of how they adverise, the in-store sales, the employees, customer satisfaction and the parking lot. Although, there may be some simillarities, there are more things that differ  between these two stores.

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5 thoughts on “Should You care where you Spend your Money?

  1. As your peers suggested, this is a strong thesis statement. The last line, however, isn’t doing much for you (you’ve essentially already said that the stores are different). What would work better there is a statement about what the differences between the stores reveal about ______________ (demographics, locations, etc.). One small fix: there needs to be an “as” between “are” and “different” in the first sentence.

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