Essay 2 Thesis – from A New Supermarket Experience

Many people assume that if you have been to one supermarket you have been to them all, but the location, specialty section/item as well as the service and web site of these two stores.  Des Peres “The Market and Schnucks “Market Place” Richmond Heights, offer a similar, yet different view.  Both supermarkets carry our everyday staples like paper towels, soap, dish detergent and other household items.

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3 thoughts on “Essay 2 Thesis – from A New Supermarket Experience

  1. I only see one error in the first sentence. It appears to be a run-on. (you have been to them all, but the location,…) You too have guided me back in the right direction with my thesis statement. The correct format when beginning a compare and contrast thesis statement. Thanks (*_*)

  2. What works well here is the way you identify what specific elements you will compare and contrast in the two stores. Stephanie is correct: there is a problem with the first sentence. It’s not a run-on but an incomplete sentence. It would help to identify “The Market” as a Dierbergs store, and to give some indication of how the stores differ.

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